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Old 07-06-02, 08:17 AM   #2
varentao
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damn...well you will be missed....guess you gotta do what you gotta do....its all good...

as for your piece...the first stanza hit me the hardest....but really..all the way through it had emotions pure and strong...i really felt how you 'symbolized' the tears...how you put them in relation to why you shed them....this was a great piece to 'go out' on...it says it all about you....capturing the pure essence of what you are trying to say.....

...good luck...and au revoir....


- life has many an obstacle, it is for you to negotiate your way past them, whether on your own, or with the help of friends/family...you shall come out a better n more stronger person....as long as you turn the negativity into positivity... - ....
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