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Old 08-29-04, 12:45 AM   #11
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Voted For: NewKid

this was a very on sided battle so ima have to give this one to new kid

Kahdaffi:
your verse was pretty good but i really wasnt feelin half of it ..some of the ryhmes didnt make sense, your structure was off.. and that made your verse hard to read, overall you had a weak verse ,next time come harder and elevate

Newkid-
Nice verse son this was one of the first verses ive been from you and you really surprised me it was alittle weak but you won you had some nice personals' ,decent okay punchlines, structure was way better then k so that is why you won..
overall keep elevating decent battle
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