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Old 08-29-04, 01:47 AM   #17
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Voted For: Street Legend

closer: ARCH ANGEL- nice way to close the battle i must say, Street urs wasn't bad but i was feelin' his..

opener: STREET- arch urs wasn't bad but in the same bar u said "public eye" then "blind eye" frustratin'.. watch word usage, don't repeat urself..

flow: STREET- simple every bar rhymed plus it wasn't complicated as if when ur speakin' it.. that's a +.. arch ur flow was messed up for mo' stretched lines altho, street had sum stretched urs were crazy.. messin' up ya flow..

Structure: Tie, ya'll both had similar structures, good and bad points no one stood out more than the other..

Vocab: Arch-hands down

Multis: Arch- also close but he took this too..

Metas: No one..

punches: Street every bar had nice punches.. Arch had nice ones too but not as effective..

Personals: STreet- the dq thing with arch vs. empire was used well for his 2nd bar, then the post count and sittin' at the computer thing.. arch really lacked personals this time.

Street came harder even tho his verse didn't have as much vocab complexity, he had the better flow in general and punches hit hard too, so yea, that's the explanation.. no hate either, and note* to STREET- don't mention that ur verse is weak, in reality it wasn't it makes people think u didn't try/ actually care bout the battle.. it wasn't weak that's sho enuff.. you got this, STREET..
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