Voted For: Tha Flash

Much better than illusion, illusion u gotta elevate bro, structure ur shit and write a line like this,
'I spit better verse than Dr Dre when hes on tour,
i'ma murk you so bad you'll be knocking on the hospital door'
Flash was ok just need to elevate, make it shorter and dont stretch your lines so much...quite good wordplay, use metas and multis if u wanna impress....'I got the burning desire to spit fire cuz i'ma livewire and my skills are better than you could ever require' try to make every word rhyme on multis and metas 'I'm like a bulldozer cuz when i destroy you when you get old, and you know i aint afraid of rhymes untold', glad to help bois.

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