Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

sHoTTaBoY
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines.. its newbish.. structure is ok.. some of ur lines were stretched though.. flow is on target.. no multis.. wordplay was pretty good.. none of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

MjGrEeN
structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. no wordplay.. none of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

Overall
MjGrEeN had the better structure.. both had good flow.. neither had multis.. neither had connecting punches.. neither had good personals.. sHoTTaBoY had better wordplay.. so basing off of that.. wordplay is more important then structure.. so sHoTTaBoY gets my vote..

VOTE - SHOTTABOY

Please return the favor with an honest vote here.. cause some of the votes were DQed, so it just got re-opened..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136172
Thanx.