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Old 08-29-04, 12:50 PM   #13
Lyriclesolja
I Create Dope Poetry For The Thinkers Of Tomarrow....I Am Lyriclesolja
 
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Voted For: -Noble-

It was a close one but i felt like Noble took it, his lines werent long and they had plenty of power when they hit keep dion ya thing......as for the other guy your sentences were way too long try and shorten them up...and the only good line in the whole thing was that online death one....it was a one sided battle to me.....

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