alright...first off wat is it wit all tha fuckin explaining...damn
actin like a couple of bitchs...but heres da break down...

mimesis...these first two bars had good punches n ok flow...
Im leave ya blown and screwed...ur just alone dude...as i lyrically stone you
And the dumbass gets rejected so much...
...he still labels himself as his own crew!*
U just thrown and bruised...your handin me the W...so i take ur gift in a cup
And good for hot for tryin to raise the bar...
...to bad he broke his back liftin it up!**
mimesis...but these last three bars lost it for u...i could tell u thought they were good but i wasnt feelin them...tha third bar was acceptable but not hot...tha forth bar was whack n so was tha closer...u shoulda kept it up...

hotshh!...ur first two bars werent hard punches, but tha flow n multis were of tha hook...but the end is wat got me...
You nonvenomous snake,kicked out ya clique,2 feminine
Only cause Eminem was taken,u named ya self Memisis
Ur sig insults wiggas,u couldnt make da cut wit scissors
Mim disapear like magicians witches warlocks an wizards<whoa...this last line was kill...
opinion...
in the end mimesis lost cuz he didnt go da stretch, which sucked cuz he coulda won wit jus punches...hotshh! had a way betta flow multis n creativity...since this was close
im gonna break it down some more
vocab::u were both good
punches::mimesis
flow::hotshh!
structure::hotshh!
personels::mimesis
creativity::hotshh!
content::hotshh!
i broke dis down! so who eva disagrees can suck it
FUCK HOTSHH!...FUCK MIMESIS...IM OUT!
PEACE...

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