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Old 08-29-04, 03:59 PM   #13
Magic5
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Voted For: Tha Flash

Tha Flash
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines.. structure is decent.. flow falls off a little.. u had some multis.. wordplay was pretty good.. some of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

NoMercy
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines.. structure is ok.. flow falls off.. no multis.. wordplay was decent.. a few of ur punches connected.. attempted personals, but they didnt connect..

Overall
Both had an ok structure.. both had an average flow.. neither had good personals.. Tha Flash had more multis.. better wordplay, and more connecting punches.. so basing off of that.. Tha Flash gets my vote..

VOTE - THA FLASH