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Old 08-29-04, 04:05 PM   #6
Typical
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Voted For: intensify effect

optimize...this verse was not bad but more bad then good...
flow kinda good but punches were not...u had metas but i didnt like them...pick up ur content n u should do betta...no hate...

I.E....
i c ur doing better...i liked tha word play on dat first bar...
tha one about abortion is played but u brought it original so i was feelin that...but tha rest was kinda off tho it has a good flow...its like it rhymes n sounds good but it just aint hittin as hard as u could. so bring it!

i.e. got this for flow, content n punches...

advice::u both should've came out harder...
FUCK OPTIMIZED...FUCK I.E....IM OUT!
PEACE...
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