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Old 08-29-04, 04:06 PM   #7
SUCC MACOKK
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this shit isnt letting me vote.Ill post my vote here then but it wonc be counted:

Dayum this wasnt even a real battle in my opinion,upfront had a wack verse and Lady Fiya turned it uppa notch and merled him.
Upfront,u need to learn how to have personals and wordplay man.Every single line of urs was very wack and basic.Get a new structure also because it is quite fucked up.The only ok thing in Ur erse was,well,nothing.Ur punches need to get stronger too,so go to Tutorials,read it through,and battle for elevation.
Lady Fiya,your verse wasnt as good as sum other ones I've read,examples vs. Empire or One man band or that diss vs. Latinkitten,but Ur punches hit quite hard,Ur structure was a bit off,Ur flow was kinda rough at points,but Ur personals and punches won this for U.Congrats.
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