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Old 08-29-04, 04:17 PM   #24
~Luciano~
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Voted For: â€- ArchAngel â€-




This boy says he was sent by God, after this death i might be regretfull
not special, but my flow is made of flames it gets compared to the devil
3/10
use "artificial intelligence to notice the length of ya verse
angel cursed, pretend i'm empire and get ya dq punched first
3/10
Ima give u a lethal injection, put this ..God.. on the cross
not from a bullet out the Mag, against Empire..admit it u lost
2/10
Riddle me this,whats up wit all the different screen names?
You must lost to vets, on this one u smashin newbies, you should be ashamed
3/10
You got over 1ooo post, you just joined two months ago
you no life havin nigga at the computer u must be comfortable
2/10
Deadly when i deliver the one two, lookin for a first round k.o
duckin ass nigga you betta stay low, cuz i got more tricks up my sleeve then that nigga A.o
4/10


Ya punches were weak wordplay was weak ya structure was about the best thing u had goin 4 u in this drop it wasent the worst verse but it was far far from the best. you need 2 elevate and get a high vocab that will help u out alot


first bar your hung out to dry,like jesus bitch i crucify... place you in the public eye with raps like that they'd turn a blind eye.
6/10..
i'm shining bright with lyrics thats fluorescent,bitch is dull hire a cosmetic...
touch up them lyrics shits pathetic you aint a battler just more poetic...
5/10
my shits leaving Street parasympathetic 'n' dont think i'll be sympathetic...
i'll diss 'n' rip ya like a surfer rips tides then up 'n' leave fuck being apologetic...
4/10
it's the way my brain ticks that says unload these clips fill em with lead...
so much i could flip this inbred 'n' write my next track with his head...
3/10
with lyrics so sick i'll leave u malcontent as i beat you with circumvent...
thats my intent i torment mc's so much they need there parents consent...
like parental guidance as i carry a warning cas i spill blood and guts...
so get off my nuts,bitch could'nt be a smash if you was a dish washer klutz...
4/10

Punches were weak and wordplay was pretty good u had some nice wordplay and nice complexity ya punches were not hittin hard at all seems like u tried 2 use your High vocab words as your punches and it jus made the flow hard 2 follow


Ok battle
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