I can rap and stuff.
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Voted For: Paramik
The Black Plague-nice verse. your structure was off, flow was coo, punches coulda been better but they were still good.you put some personals in their that were ok. some lines were kinda self glorification tho. metas were ehh. work on the structure a lil more and the punches a lil more.....7/10
Paramik-structure was real nice, punches were tight, overall nice. but the personal about bp connect was weak as fuck, i know it had potential but just didnt connect at all. metas were coo, wordplay was coo, basically only won because of slightly better punches....7.5/10
yall both know you can do better. RTF..links in the sig.
v//paramik
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