*listening*
Quality needs to be upped a bit. Your intro was way louder than your actual vocals. I could hardly hear you. You need to raise the vocals a bit. Maybe run it through a click and pop filter. I really couldn't hear the lyrics, so I can't help you there. Fade the instrumental out after you are done. I'm glad to see you are doing audio now, but you need to look at a few tutorials before the next time you drop.
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