Voted For: intensify effect

drew- no paragraph structure ever again. bad structure, bad flow, bad punches bad everything. expand your mind, get excited bout battling and then you can elevate and compete....2/10

i.e.-blah. i dont like all the gunplay and shit so stop that. fucked structure in some places, ok flow, ehhh punches. just elevate also.....5/10

RTF...links in my sig

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