Thread: DRAG~ON vs Poet
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Old 08-29-04, 10:15 PM   #12
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Voted For: Poet

well both good pieces but i havta give it ta poet he came with much more content in his verse n sectioned it off well n it was a good read with alot of feeling n much more complex vocab....drag~on you had some really nice stuff to but your verse dropped off in the end n your vocab needed ta be a bit more complex.....i think both could elevate on your ending ta make the topic more of an impact....imagery was good on both sides but overall i was jus feeling this one more....
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