Voted For: Phantom

Both of you were good
Kustum: yours was iight but your structure was messed and i couldnt read it well but it was good and decent you had ok strucutre and ya punches were ok and so were you personals good lines and ok vere overall

Phantom: good shit good lines overall but i really don't like it when you space each bar but yours was good you had gos punches and ya personals were good also you had better structure and flow so you get the win

Vote Phantom

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