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Voted For: LyRiKaLMiRiKaL
Codee
aight bitch its time to rhyme and u gonna probably jump ship.
The only time u had a taste of white was with some cool whip.
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Not feelin the opener
U gotta dick in your mouth so much u wind up with cleft lip.
Only time u smokin is when its comin off my 12" barrel tip.
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Decent lines...
When u gettin pushed down steps thats the only time u havin' a "lil' flip."
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Weak cause it was "cornball"ish
I brought this shit and it ended up as one crazy ass flow.
U bent over and got out your skoal can out when Milian said "Dip It Low"
^Killer finisher
LyRiKaLMiRiKaL
Verses disturb fakes an ya curse at the verbs sprayed//
his flow's bad, but at least it ain't worse than his wordplay//!!
^Ha I likes the punch but didn't like the set up
I topple led with my wordplay and the debacle spreads as my verbs spray//...
This flawless verse *got you shakin* worse than *Bobble Heads In An Earthquake//
^Again, nice punch. Microchip of emprovement on the set up line
Guanylate ... Teachin Lessons?!? I wont leave any enemies spared//
NOPE!!... Youre location doesnt really matter cause I can murk you anywhere//
^weak
i've got the guns, while ya juss wish u was rockin lugz//
cuz it's sad when ur claim to fame is beatin a newbie once//!
^barely rhymes
u can get tossed in a fire trap, an boxed wit an ironrack//
cuz ya skill's like ya self-worth, ya lost it a while back//!!
^was a decent finisher
Ok now CODEE had a nice finisher, but his overall freestyle just didn't cut it for me. Lyrikal came more consistent with his skills, especially with the punches.
P.S, vote on my sh*t. Check the signature.... \/
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