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Old 08-30-04, 02:49 AM   #9
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Voted For: LyRiKaLMiRiKaL



Lyrikalmirikal

this cat's clutchin-ya-nine but he's the one wit slugs-in-his-spine//
i'm fast enuff to crush ya skull without even touchin-ya-mind//
^beautiful ish...

twenty-twos-spray with blue-flame n scatter this dude's-brainz//
all over the floor-board of his F*ck*n foor-door like loose-change//
^damn, cool, but seem like I heard this somewhere else before...

so violent-n-sick i'll gut myself n puncture your eye-wit-my-rib//
cut you so fast u bleed to death before the knife slices-ya-skin//
^that's a bite from canibus. *looses points*

rhymes-that-rip-Sh*t, ya spliced-n-twisted if ya try-to-diss-this//
my verbs impact like nuclear shock waves with twice-the-distance//
^Haha real nice punch and self glorification...

violent-n-ornery, why would i try pullin a tech nine-in-a-robbery
F*ck bullets, my punchlines crush-spines at twice-the-velocity//!!!
^Probably should've finished with some type of personal on him to finish off better.

Tha Flash

Now I Dare Do U To Step Me,
I Have Pieces Of Ya Brain Drop In Ya Refill Like It's Esctasy//
^below par
So Next To Me Can't No One Do It Better,
All U Gotta Do Is Push My Button And I'll Eat U Up Like A
Paper Shredder//
^not too good
Nigga My Rhymes Work Mirikals,
I'll Push Them Dicks Outta Ya Face So U Can Get A Clear View//^you kind of diss ya self sayin you touch dicks...
I Don't Know Why U Tried To Battle Me Newb,
Cause I'll Let The Nine Flatten Ya Head Like A Tire With No
Intertube//^not doing it for me
It's Either Win Or Lose And U Lost,
Cause My Pump Had U Jumping Like U Was Part Of Criss Cross//^sorry,you is done.

Flash you came way too weak you didn't have a chance. The efforts was there, but you was throwin a whole bunch of haymakers that just wasn't landing. As in his last battle, Lyrikal kept it fairly consistent throughout, which gets him my vote.
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