this piece was coo man some deep shit kinda like the peice i read earlier from someone below this thread
flow was kinda off sometimes cuz of typos sometimes cuz of your rhyme scheme
you should try some multis it'll help your flow out
you had some good thoughts like the army&school shit very true
then some ones that could have been more thought out and expressed in a more meaningful way
although the piece was pretty simple you had some good shit in here nice drop man