Thread: Let's Dance
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Old 08-30-04, 11:50 AM   #2
Idyllic Queen
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From: Somewhere over the rainbow...
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I thought this was a cool piece...nice that you kept the stanza's the same...with beats and length...it was very nice. Sometimes I thought it sounded...a little..forced...kind of I dont know, like it didnt flow that good...like...kiddish...uhm...yeah, but overall it was really nice!
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