Apollyon
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IP:
Voted For: hotshh!
this was easy...
hotshh! had killa wordplay n good punches...
da creativity on dis line had me rollin...lol
Trust That.. Its Scary the way I Crush Cats...
cuz dis F aggot L ick A ss an S uck H airy nutsacks!
dats sum funny shit...
the flash...
ur verse wasnt nearly as good...i mean u rhymed n shit but ur punches were weeeeeeek n ur metas either sucked or didnt make sence
example...
Ya From The Bronx Or So U Claim,
I Ain't A Magician But I'll Still Blow Ya Brain//
since when do magicians blow brains...WHAT DA FUCK R U TALKIN ABOUT
ADVICE...
hotshh! should've worded his first two lines better...
the flash needs to work on his content n punches...
both flows were good
punches::shh!
flow::tied
metas::shh!
content::shh!
creativity::shh!
structure::tied but i dont like those double slashes flash
FUCK FLASH...FUCK HOTSHH!...IM OUT!
PEACE!
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