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Old 08-30-04, 01:52 PM   #12
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man this was one sided.

-Ab

fluent, flow was good. transitions could be lil betta, creative i liked it...story tellin...nice way.


Word- u did pretty good neva seen yo stuff before. but u could have put them together differently so ppl could understand. flow was on and off, not creative, transition was there...overall aight drop
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