yo man to be honest your'se is what i ould rate it you got good stucture but thats it not to many rhymes or multis ya a few but i dont realy no multis i just kno that i do them lol and metas you had lots but no rhymes a few like skin and shit bill kill thats it man yer ok but need to elavate bad im better then you and im 14 i diddent even spit good this battle i did liek a 15 min song like a freestyle pretty much