Voted For: Da Jokah

ayo i take a puff of tha droh..load up and iam ready to ride,
grab ma stuff and i go...enter tha room u all ready to hide//
^un unh, no not tight.
your open micz should be closed...and same wit cha mouth,
nigga u aint dirrty u jus west..stop thinkin u from da south//
^funny but wordage could have been maneuvered more cleverly
Iam from tha city of Queenz..were we kill niggas by all meenz,
were we got crime scenes...and blast niggas who be feenz//
^shut the hell up.
yo nigga u a feen to ma lyricz..matta fact u jus ugly,
ruff tuff thug haha u hear-in-this..tell me wat a thug be//
^damn this verse sucks so far...
i put fear in bitches like u...i can see tha fear commiin,
iam a nasty nigga..i bust in ya ear..so u can Hear me commin'//
^this other verse tonna have to be terrible for you to win this battle...
haha ya lyrics aint feelin u ..u got betraid like a snitch,
and nigga its ova iam surious iam a have u laid like yo bitch//
^best lines, but still sub-par

rufftuffthug

yo you again this time i'll realy kill yoou faggot ass da jokah...
stand back and cry bitch and watch how and i fuckin smoke
ya...
^not clever...
you aint a rapper or a poet you a little wannab...
your gay and helpless thats why you stand next to me...
^damn Jokah got a chance...
your interrests are basketball i dont see rap...
its prolly cuz you cant rap and you suck that bad...
^OMG come on that was terrible!
your a yung bitch with old ass skillz...
i give fuckas like you hits abd bitches thrillz...
^Don't know about all this...
yo ur crew is the bloodz funny cuz all i see is blood...
stand back and fuck off before you get cut...
^
i'll kill yo family yo mutha and take yo fuckin gut...
i'll kill you and rape you mutha fuckin slut...

Both these verses were terrible. Both need to work on wordplay,metas,flow and whatever other element of good freestyle there is cause yall need work on them all. Both was terrible but it's a tight battle...Jokah's was least terrible so he wins. He was consistent at least and THUG started gettin real horrible in the middle and stayed so through the end of his verse. Couldn't even finish critiquin bar by bar. Work on it, and DON'T FORGET TO VOTE ON MY BATTLES!!! Check the signature...\/