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Old 08-31-04, 06:10 AM   #12
Terumoto
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Voted For: WildFire

I.M.: nice shit. I found it kinda hard to read.. really cliched rhymes and plot.. I liked that shit at the end though how the car crash was her friend.. Nice twist.

Wild: Flow was more complex than I.M.s.. had more multis n shiet so ya verse flowed a lil better... content was good.. nice plot.. same deal with the party cept it started originally, so it was all good.. MADD twist at the end... I love that kinda shit.
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