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Old 08-31-04, 12:37 PM   #7
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Voted For: konfuzed

dint like your structure but it dint fall off,n your punches i thought were better,liked how your dint have ta use gun play in your verse...both still need ta elevate on copmplexity though...n that smores/beat line was lame it came off as self glorification,leave that type of shit out from now on...
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