Not a bad piece, had some lines which were powerful, jus didnt think the rest of the piece showed its style... The concept was simple, werent really no substance to it, had no depth it was jus there... The wordplay was nicely used, more punches thrown woulda showed your ability... The rhyme scheme was the element that caught my eye the most, it was working throughout, internal rhymes and multies were nicely used... Liked some of this, thought you coulda thought of something a bit more original, keep spitting and elevating...

Peez...