this was alright..some of it was reepetative unless the
beginning and end part were the hook to your verse...

everyone aint all like that ..isnt...even if many might
choose to think otherwise kid many look at a story one sided
especially if someone acts completely out of their character...

those that I knew considered themselves leaders
I wanted to only lead with them not step on...

not everyones the same man but as
for this rhyme itwas okay