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Old 08-31-04, 05:36 PM   #6
N.Tavarez
the medicine man
 
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Voted For: A.K.A.

aka ya verse was good..flash u verse needs so editing
ya 1st bar sucked..asshole rhymes with asshole? wow!
great more tina turner lines...played
more holes than a box of donuts? why someone else aint think of that? ohhhhh they did, but 50 times..
aka ya verse was aiight but u need more punches and ya vocab was type simple... u had better personals and u aint need them cuz he gave u the win...no hate at all.. the verses dont lie.. aka just try to kill em harder next time and flash try to be more creative...
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