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Old 08-31-04, 06:20 PM   #8
N.Tavarez
the medicine man
 
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Voted For: EX-ile

kahdaffi this isnt ya best, ive read yours before...
this was too simple too many ?'s like jadakiss song why?
no punches at all, no personals at all.. bad struc simple flow..
but since i seen ya betta stuff ill take it as just a bad day

exile ya shit was pretty good fa someone i neva read..
decent punches, like that retard one was funny
overall better verse but that kudafi personal was FOUL man!
struc needs work so its easier to read..
more harder punches and more personals and ya verse will be fire...both ya got skill so ill loook out for ya names...
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