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Old 08-31-04, 09:02 PM   #14
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Voted For: E Looch

creativitie

i never lie i speak the truth when i say you got potential`
as i manifest my rhymes...and bring death to a instramental`
nope it was basically a self-glorification bar for you and the first line was a glorification to E Looch 4/10
got me feeling sentimental...so i surpass blurs, and bag herbs`
while this massocure occures...i get crowned king with my words`
another self-glorification line basically 5/10
see the creator has risen......your just a overrated oppisite`
my apex is to high...they claimed as an everlasting apacolipse`
aight should of switched the lines around
so the second line would be the punch.....5.5/10

crime syndicate lacks creativitie .........it culd never be class sic...`
e loch is living proof...been defeated and the measures are drastic`
nope not great 4.5/10
kid your obslete...jus cuz u accpeted doesnt mean u can compete`
bitch just stop.....your better off pressing control, alt, delete`
basically another filler seen better from you5/10

E Looch

ya words lack bite like muzled dogs ya rhymes leave no scars
like fat people tryin arobics strecthed marks is alias for ya bars
dope ass opener I was feeling it nice wordplay
at all points but sort of played 7/10

I phrase an harm got ears ringin lke bazed alarms
u could father 2 sleeves an still couldnt raise an arm
1st line was a self-glorification blah.........
but you picked it up on the second line was dope
and tremendously great wordplay 7/10

wannabe NaS rapper keep swearin hes a streets diciple
bitin my shit he really has a thiefs theme on a daily cycle
ummm not feeling it but good flow 6/10
runs out of paper so create just prewrites on his vest
battlin mes the only way hes gettin shit off his chest
nice nice 6.5/10
im consumed in ya eyes like cataracts supportin pupil babies
sunned u without adoption papers no need to follow with truthfull maybes
niiiiice wordplay and good punch 7/10

ummm vote: E Looch
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