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Old 08-31-04, 10:15 PM   #26
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From: chi-town
This was feedback posted for QBsmasher

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just feedback, qb- style was simple and had a few hard-hittin' punches.. ku$tum image- ur structure can be a lil' annoyin' but it would sound better if you say it, so i think u won plus ur punches did hit harder but y'all both seem like y'all were missin' complexity (kustum u don't have to put quotations around rhymin' words, better if u used it for metaphors and wordplay), that's feedback.. good luck to the two..
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