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Old 08-31-04, 10:41 PM   #9
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Voted For: J DOT

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ruff tuff~your verse was good,your flow was ok, but your words seemed to be forced into little space, which is hard to do, overall decent punches and nice structure....
jdot~your verse was very well done, you had nice flow, strong punches, and good personals, nice battle, i liked your last couple of lines, very funny........nice job
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