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Old 08-31-04, 11:06 PM   #6
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Voted For: Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG

DaPunchLineKing~nice strong verse here, good punches and personals, nice flow as well, liked ya opener as well as ya last line, overall good job
NoMercy~decent verse as well,but punches werent as strong and flow a little off, no hate at all just some pointers,but decent
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