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Old 08-31-04, 11:20 PM   #14
Kawn Flixx
FUCK STROBE
 
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hmmmm pretty decent battle

T.V.:
nice opener-flow was good and sturc. too
but alotta your punches een used over and over
............and over and over.....again
so it gave me alotta flashbacks and it ruined your verse

Empire:

ok good flow this time-punches were original
except for the last line- it wsa bout his momma
and his age so it been played-
but you only had one and he had alot
so you win with punches

vote/Empire
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