Voted For: QBsmasher

QBsmasher: Pretty good verse man, you have amazing wordplay and a nice way with metas nice man.

Your flow is always right on point and goes from bar to bar well. Wordplay and punchlines go together, a few multies would help you though.

Metas you are really nice on, the beauty salon and the goo good dolls stuff is nice good job man.

You didnt come with any personals though that would have helped you a lot.

Good verse though, it was consistent.

DrasticmeasureZ: You need to stop with all the dashes and so forth it really throws off what you are trying to do. Keep it basic and you sound a lot better.

Your flow wasnt really pickin up with me. I just didnt see how you were trying to word it sorry.

Punches you were pretty nice with, I liked the opening of your verse, got a lil wack in places but it was decent.

Metas I think is a place you can work on, as well as personals you didnt have any. As well as your multies were non-existant as well.

I thought QBsmasher was a lil more consistent and he just battled right with it. It doesnt take much effort to win, big big ups to both of you all though.