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Voted For: QBsmasher
Not a whole lot of content to judge, so you needed to come just right to the point with it here.
QBsmasher you were nice with starting out with a personal(im not sure many people can get it though) that I felt was really nice. Starting off the battle is a strong point to have. Your wordplay also is a strong point I notice of yours.
NIce flow and punches were hittin really hard. You dont seem to use multies in your battle for some reason it helps to add to complexity and as well flow, you should consider them.
Kustom Image: You need to work on your wordplay, you dont use any at all in your battles. This helps to hype up your punches and makes them hit harder. I felt QB had harder punches becaus he started right off with a personal that was pretty complex. I noticed the last one you had was a personal but it didnt connect well (as I already heard it from nas)
The flow was also a lil off, your structure just needed some work to clear that up. Some of the multies you were attempting as well, really werent good rhymes. You get a few points for trying them though...but you still get my props just elevate.
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