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Old 09-01-04, 12:37 AM   #27
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Drastic

Punches right n' left, disect your spine~n~neck, it's like 'poachers-against-humane-society' how I be 'killin~this~VET' // 1 (Rated R.I.P)
^ha nice
Ya knees shakin' nervous, I be feedin' on earth's surface, I'm on your 'girl' like 'gynecologist', Dr. drastic at your 'cervix'//2(service...haha)
^tight sh*t.
My word's~purpose to serve this verse~perfect, to hit~wit~shit~viscous, so 'sick' that I got the nurse~workin//3
^eh, ok I guess
Verbs and wordplay, inflate murder-rates, de-face you wit words like 'cerebral adhesives' cuz they 'stick to ya brain' and decay//4
^whoohoo! damn like that one a lot.
You might as well 'cuff~my~ventricles' to put me in 'cardiac~arrest', cuz at your rate... you battlin me like you 'missed~dracula', a 'mis~stake'//5(stake to kill dracula)
^stretched lines man. good play on words though.
You'd need to 'ignite~carosine~vomit' just to 'spit~yaself~a~flame' and need to buy Hip Hop Edition Scrabble just to 'give~yourself~a~name'//6
^okizzle
Breakin' my 'paintings' the only way you bend my 'frame', you'd prob go as far as cuttin yaself in '16 bits' and claim ya 'in~the~game'//7(16 bit video game...Sega?)
^cool,cool
You 'angered' my verbs and lines, so they swingin punches and red-faced, that's what I call mad rhymes//8
Your victory be denied, with these lines you'd need to put '___________' many times to get me closer to 'flatlines'//9(heart rate machine)
^average line
Call me the 'merk~doner', you lost bitch own~up, your rhymes so 'shit' I didn't really think that 'HTML' code could also submit such a bad 'aroma'//10
^phew, that's some funky sh*T.



QBsmasher

When I drop the verse, Ill leave this DJ without a clue
Lets see if he can swizz beats and drag on with a bar or two
^decent
I dont even have to throw head shots, I just ribbed you homie
Your whole verse will probably sound like a tribute towards me
^nope.
If this dude was raw, I just cooked him cause he got cracked on
He aint throwin punches, he blows more heads than a beauty salon
^this was cool but wasn't no hard hitting punch.
Wannabe Emcees use me as their guiding light like the north star
Thats why for years i been crashing them into reifs and sand bars
^hmm, intresting lines.
Allow me to "slide" in and dialte your "iris" with my lyrical fame
This "black balloon" is a "long way down" and noone knows his "name"*
^If I knew who the goo goo dolls were You'd get more credit for this, but you still get credit cause you snapped with the songs.

Damn this is tough. Liked both verses. Drastic had more than QB and his sh*t was good. QB just didn't have no punches and Drastic did. QB's wordplay was cool, but Drastic beats him in every category.
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