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Old 09-01-04, 12:55 AM   #33
shake-spear
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Voted For: raw killa

my vote goes to raw killa

breakdown:
ya name raw killa-but u mainly bitch.
N Last time ya gay ass saw a 'girl bare chest' it was grizzly tits *ha*

wordplay was alright not the best onpener though.

if u spit with ya whole click... B.A.M, u'll suck like a gun on lips full of lead
boy u went the wrong way, only good steps u'll think of on ya mind is me standing on ya head

this was a weak bar punch didnt move me.

this battle like sadam N bush...something u should of avoided
cuz my concepts sick, N you couldn’t flip shit with back-fiering toilettes

i like this bar pretty good.

N bitch,
ya web site a link for the retarts N impaired
my rhymes tight, u'll have to drop lines of hair to even compare!!

iight this bar was alright kinda on the weak side.

u needed a bitch-slap, asking 4 a battle wanting to see-me-later
when ya punches couldnt even ball-up to swing like ya avator...

personal punch pretty good closer.


dis bitch couldnt "intensify" an "effect" of his weak punches/
if he packed his fist wit "shots" of 151 or instant concussions/

like the wordplay alright opener.

time 2 put dis bitch unda da "wing"/
like a "father n son kind of" thing/ (lol)

pretty good punch kinda short though messed up the flow.

tlkn bout how bad he wanna callabo 2getha/
then tlk shit bout how he can rhyme betta/

weak bar i didnt feel this.

i "intensify" dis bitches verse wit hollywood special "effects"/
give him a star role in da next friday after next after next/
fill dis bitch thug wit slugs so he can die in da "projects"/
n change dis "challenged" rappaz name 2 "decrease in effect"/

good closer i like the wordplay and usage of his name.

well i think raw killa won this battle even know both the verses werent that good he still came harder.

return the favor wit an honost vote on my battles:

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=146187

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=146308
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