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Old 09-01-04, 01:12 AM   #34
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Voted For: intensify effect

intensify effect

ya name raw killa-but u mainly bitch.
N Last time ya gay ass saw a 'girl bare chest' it was grizzly tits *ha*
^lol

if u spit with ya whole click... B.A.M, u'll suck like a gun on lips full of lead
boy u went the wrong way, only good steps u'll think of on ya mind is me standing on ya head
^omg overstretched like a motherF*cka
this battle like sadam N bush...something u should of avoided
cuz my concepts sick, N you couldn’t flip shit with back-fiering toilettes
^ha damn. even though stretchedlines

N bitch,
ya web site a link for the retarts N impaired
my rhymes tight, u'll have to drop lines of hair to even compare!!
^not registering for me.

u needed a bitch-slap, asking 4 a battle wanting to see-me-later
when ya punches couldnt even ball-up to swing like ya avator...
^decent

raw killa


dis bitch couldnt "intensify" an "effect" of his weak punches/
if he packed his fist wit "shots" of 151 or instant concussions/
^cool opener

time 2 put dis bitch unda da "wing"/
like a "father n son kind of" thing/ (lol)
^some choppy bs man.
tlkn bout how bad he wanna callabo 2getha/
then tlk shit bout how he can rhyme betta/
^um...so!
i "intensify" dis bitches verse wit hollywood special "effects"/
give him a star role in da next friday after next after next/
^oh man you lost steam after that opener.
fill dis bitch thug wit slugs so he can die in da "projects"/
n change dis "challenged" rappaz name 2 "decrease in effect"/
^omg I don't know what to say.

Hell raw killa you need work on consistency. You can't come out with one decent bar and just ban all structure for the rest of your lines.

Wasn't feelin' either a whole lot. intensify was ok with his stuff but damn raw killa jus became some wack rookie after that opener. vote intensify.
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