Voted For: Empire

My 'verbs' 'X'out 'herbs' like 'Belly' fan of 'Nelly' look at his 'handle'
Either dont know rap or you 'gay' either 'way'they should 'ban you'(1)
^all good

No 'way' this like 'N.B.A' and you no more then a 'munchkin'
You get 'left sun' think ya 'percept shun' is in need of 'adjustment'(2)
^hotness
'Grammer' say you clap 'hammers' rock 'bandanaas' and 'bag whores'
But you never held a 'mag' yous a 'fag' and thats why ya pants 'sag for'(3)
^no punch here man

Never 'scuffled' most 'trouble' you seen was 'shop lifting'
Still 'waiting' ya 'elevation' like trash weed its 'not lifting'
^alright.
FINISHER-
13 cant 'drive' cant 'survive' without ya mommy to 'run you'
So 'fuck words' im gonna 'fuck her' be ya daddy then 'son you'(4)
^for real tight closer.

Tachyonic Vokals

I could tell this guy’s pussy and weak, gave up on his OWN crew.
It’s like forgetting to return books, cause his rhymes are overdue.
^boo no punch man. Where's the insult in the punch?
This kid must be a big joke, he'll die when he's smoked like coke.
Guy’s probably just breaking his bread, except he’s “bar broke.”
^decent
This is like a game, but I bet he still couldn't get a play on words.
He needs to balance all his fucking “lines”... like telemarketers.
^damn this soft.
Thought this kid was hard, but only cause he’s lines are stone aged.
Old as fuck, thought he was made a vet, but bitch was never made.

Bet this kids gonna be rushing out of the battle, like classes dismissing.
Kid’s like failing planes, brings the fact his punches are always “missing.”

Really don't wanna finish critiquing Vokal line by line cause his verse was making me mad it was boring me do deaf. no punches. Seem like you put effort into it but just not measuring up to empire. Similes were weak and kind of childs play, which makes sense cause you only 13, right?

Anyway, Empire showed more overall skill with nice structure, flow and style. He got this one easily.