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Old 09-01-04, 02:17 PM   #10
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Voted For: Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG

wow... i dont feel like puttin a whole explanation so heres feedback... aww what tha hell, i'll vote
Punchline king gets this one because his flow was easy to follow and he actually had pretty good punchlines... i like that once in a blue shyt and that birthday was christmas... that was hot

as for Shittyboy... damn, my bad Shottaboy (i really did think yo name was shittyboy)... as fo you, your flow and structure really messed this up for you... 3 line rhyme schemes really suck ass and make a rap terrible because there is a lack of balance in yo rap... after you spit tha third line its like people are still waitin to hear tha 4th...
you didnt really have any punchlines and that difference also puts PunchlineKing ahead of you in this battle

V/ DAPUNCHLINEKING
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