Voted For: Sonofisis#1

This was a easy win for Sonofisis#1,

(Iv'e Read Yo Rhymes Kid, And You Leave Me Bored To Death
He Spells His Name "Phive" coz he Can't Afford The F
You Ain't Shit Bitch, I'm changin The Game
Rap's In Ya Blood? Well I'm Drainin Ya Vains)

That first two bars was really good....LOL.

(I'm about to really hurt this Niggas feelings
If His Computer Had a Virus, he'd prolly give it Penecillin)

Aiight punch but, needs work on the end rhyming words.
Penecillin and Feelings?? Don't actually rhyme buddy.
But still a good punch.



Phive- Structure is all around bad, to the point in which I didn't read the whole thing. I don't know where your rhymes begin and end sometimes. You need to work on a solid structure.


Opener-Sonofisis
Punches-Sonofisis
Multis-Sonofisis
Punches-Sonofisis
Closer-Sonofisis

Final Vote- Sonofisis, hands down.


Phive-You need to work on elevating son. Try to control your structure a lil too.

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