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Old 09-01-04, 08:46 PM   #15
fernoe
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This was feedback posted for * Word *

IP:

Wow this was dope. I didnt really like word's rhyme scheme (or should i say lack of rhyme scheme?) but apart from that i thought it was dope.

flow: chi
No rhyme sheme meant it was hard to make word's verse flow

punches: chi
i dont think word used punches, but chi def. did

kicks: word
he even says he kicked him in the teeth. chi used no kicks.

baseball bat: word
all his swings landed hard, one even got chi in the head

originality: word
i thought word came a lot more original. chi was just battling normally but word explained how he kicked the shit out of him, which proves you should not fuck with a chav

multis:chi
i think this is right

structure: word
the whole verse was in perfect order.

personals: word
word stole chi's wallet AND his hat (omfg!!), you can't get any more personal than that

VOTE: i cant vote, but *word* won this easy
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