Nice piece to read actually...you had good emotion in some parts...but the thing that got me was the topic...lol...knowing you could get bitched at..but it's coo...overall nothing much to dislike...but good overall...here's my favorite part...
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Originally Posted by Best Part Of Daz's Verse
And yes we are better than you..No one doubts that..
Shit we took the skill in the breakup..and that was a whileback..
I mean we have our assholes,Wack heads, and ego's...
But half this fucking site is one big freepost...
Yet me writing this is not a way to boast..
But how many fucking times Do i get Pm'd here for votes?..
Call me what you like...hater, fag herb or punk..
But in the end..Your The ones that WE DIDNT WANT...
I mean the people i hate from here..are the people i hated there..
and if there here dope wack there...where did this skill appear..
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^Truest and best flowing part of your verse...no doubt you didnt have to think too hard for this verse...but the rhymes were good..and flow was nice....
BreakDown
Flow - Very Good
Emotion - Good
Concept - Very Good
Vocabulary - Good
Overall:
Nice read...good topic no doubt...lol.....nothing else to really say that I haven't already said I suppose....
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Rating:
7.5/10