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Old 09-02-04, 12:09 PM   #13
~Sonofisis~
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Voted For: SexyChick1338

Sindicate, you let a girl rip you cuz, well not rip you, but i think that she won.. her punchlines were more creative, nothing special, but sindicate didn't really have any, like when she said you're inviting trouble like open doors, i get it, but it ain't that hard, yet, it was still a punch, sindicate didn't have any like that.. personals are lacking, both should of diged up some dirt..sexy chick gets it on structure too, her lines were way cleaner and more paralell.. vocab and wordplay also lacked because you both used basic word of expression to get your points across, but all in all

V/SexyChick1338

return favor right here thanx..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=146839
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