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Voted For: PayDay
payday took this by a small margin...let me break this down...
This rookie wants to battle but doesn’t know BARS ARE//
Have this kid in a coma so quick, he’ll be won’t be seeing “FAR STARS”// * 5/10...played
It’s prertty said that you just RAPE YA EX//
As you FLEX ya dickryde people cuz ya think your rich off welfare CHECKS// 6/10...creative
I got ya CLUELESS, no surprise I’m making ya CREW-LESS//
I'm gonna be makin ya pay fa THIS // 5/10....2nd line was lame
I’m stealin ya “Sole” like I’m leaving ya SHOE-LESS//
With ya name is the title all the vets saying “WHO DIS??” // 4/10...not made for a battle
This kid is getting shot up, so he’s “ BASHFUL AND YELPS//
To be me this dumbass even had to ASK FOR MY HELP// 4/10..i dont think he asked for ure help...payday is well capable...
I'm built to last~ up in that ass I make all the noise~
How you lookin like Emmitt Smith~ runnin back to get your boys~ 5/10...played out...coulda said it better
When shit gets tight~like Barry White I practice what I preach~
Little shorties wanna be down like Brandy when they hear me speak~ 5/10...weak ass line
Shakin and bakin and takin yo shit~Beatin your pussy and wreckin yo clit~
I catch you and I dead you~I got you if I shot at you~got yo goods~pilled yo cap and dip~ 7/10...a strong line...mulities
a skitzofranic that's makin you panic when I pull this gage~
I do more licks and throw more kicks~ than Johnny Cage~(mortal combat) 7/10...good word use...
I'm fuckin what you been talkin~you've been walkin~stalkin like a hawk~
And trigger be triggin~ when I click it cause my pain ain't stickin~crumbles like chalk~8/10...hiddin meaning..pussy crumbles like chalk...creative
Gats and glocks~moeny and rocks~you best to believe I gets the loot~
Fuckin you in your pussy hole~watch your little body shoot~6/10...kinda waek...but hits
You're fuckin with a lunatic~ a psycho in a war zone~so girl cover your shit
Nobody's boostin me~I'm tootin cane on my own~this aint no porn skit 7/10...self glorifacation...but a strong line
payday was just overall a lil better...and sexychicks verse seems prewritin...my opinion...but u both have to elevate....sexy u can tell ure young...ure so inocent wit wat u say...come harder...and both flowed...vote PAYDAY
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