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Old 09-02-04, 06:15 PM   #14
Abraxas
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Voted For: creaTivitie

damn both are wack as fuck but it was iight i though creativite could have came harder but o well
Word: yours was basic not any striong punches or personals at all you need to work on that... also you had ok flow and strucutre

Creativite: yours was not the best i've seen but its iight yours was good anyways you had some ok personals and good punches you had some lines that made me laugh

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