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Old 09-02-04, 06:23 PM   #5
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Voted For: NoMercy

sorry this battle has to No Mercy... although neither verse was really all that hot and neither had good punchlines, No Mercy's was a harder verse... he hit wit strong rhymes that could scare somebody (not really but thats what they was meant for) and his flow went along good wit tha rap...

Tanto...
you had no punchlines and your flow was questionable... when you repeated tha word battle, that really brought down your verse. i wouldnt reccomend repeatin a word unless you are using it in a multi rhyme line... aight

v/ No Mercy
both need some elevatin... might wanna cheeck out some of tha threads that are posted in tha "Back Stage" forum for help
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