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I'm High.
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This was feedback posted for bLiNkZ
IP:
our plots stopped...beat me...i got more wins than this verse has got dots/
im top notch... and the only time you spit something explosive is pop-rocks/
nice intro.
Structure was well, punches were ok, nice personals and vocab, the intro was better than every line afterwords.
some verses were weak like the ending. it was all good
lol, Yvonne some of ya verses didn't make sence, like
"i took a look at ur pic and i swear u look just like a monkey
u'ld never fuck a gurl right,cos i saw ur dick was clunky"
That's some funny shit... but u had alright flow,and some funny but wtf personals, simple vocab .. u need alot of elavation i see some potiental..
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